Jacob Robinson"Don't tell me women's hockey shouldn't be an Olympic sport, that was as good as it gets."
Evan Soloman "Could that be one of the best hockey games ever? Maybe. Congrats on gold for . What a comeback."
Steve Paikin "tell me people don't care about women's hockey as much as men's. this place just erupted. ``
These 3 people say that women`s hockey should be in the Olympics. Some people are saying that women's hockey shouldn't be in the Olympics because there is no competition because its always Canada and USA in the finals. I agree with this because there is simply no competition because the other countries are just under developed. The other countries don't focus on women's hockey because they think that its a waste of time when they are so underdeveloped while Canada and USA are just destroying competition. I also agree with this because even though its an interesting match up between Canada and USA it gets boring after a while because its always the same match up, I would like to see other teams like Sweden and Russia vsing in the finals.
I have mixed feeling`s about this topic because i agree with it and disagree. I disagree with this because women`s hockey is a tradition in the Olympics because it has always been in the Olympics. I agree with this because in my statement before the other teams are just simply are to underdeveloped if they other countries were more developed then i wouldnt disagree with this topic
If you want more information on this topic just click the links
http://globalnews.ca/news/1162894/is-womens-hockey-an-endangered-olympic-event/
http://www.ctvnews.ca/sochi/iihf-president-women-s-hockey-will-never-be-out-of-olympics-1.1691364
I have mixed feeling`s about this topic because i agree with it and disagree. I disagree with this because women`s hockey is a tradition in the Olympics because it has always been in the Olympics. I agree with this because in my statement before the other teams are just simply are to underdeveloped if they other countries were more developed then i wouldnt disagree with this topic
If you want more information on this topic just click the links
http://globalnews.ca/news/1162894/is-womens-hockey-an-endangered-olympic-event/
http://www.ctvnews.ca/sochi/iihf-president-women-s-hockey-will-never-be-out-of-olympics-1.1691364
Hi Azeem. I think you did a good job on your post; you had a few details and explanations on your opinion for whether or not women's hockey should be taken out of future Olympic Games. You did not provide very much detail about the arguments between those who were for this idea and those who were against. Also, you should make sure that you have all the necessary letters capitalized, remember your apostrophes when using contractions, and have proper punctuation. Your opinion on whether you agreed or not was good; you provided lots of reasons as to why you felt this way. I also agree with your decision, if other teams were allowed to play in the finals instead of the teams always being Canada and the United States of America, I'm sure it would be more entertaining and more fair for the other countries.
ReplyDeleteHi Azeem! I liked your introduction a lot; it's interesting to see what others had to say about the controversy surrounding women's hockey in the Olympics. However, I think you did not include much information about why women's hockey shouldn't be in the Olympics, and vice versa. Why do you think the other countries think that women's hockey is a "waste of time"? Do you think other countries specialize in certain sports as well, the way Canada or the United States is with hockey? You should also watch out for your punctuation and capitalization. Good job with your opinions. I also have mixed feelings about this controversy: it does get boring every once in a while, always seeing Canada vs the United States; we should give other countries a chance. However seeing as Canada and the United States are most developed in this sport, there is no other way for other countries to advance unless they step up their game. This was a very interesting article to read.
ReplyDeleteHi Azeem.
ReplyDeleteYour post for the womens hockey topic was really good. I think that you should have put more detial in your paragraghs and added examples and your own opinion about the topic and ask questions like when did this happen or why did this happen. It was good how you talked about the two teams but you couldve added more detail to you paragraphs. Good Job :)